Also, a trivial complain, you used the word "discriminate" (Latin, discriminare "to divide, separate"), which has negative connotations today. I suggest a neutral term like "discern" ( discernere "distinguish, perceive, sift/sieve") is better in this case for the casual audience.
Looking forward to further chapters.
Also, a trivial complain, you used the word "discriminate" (Latin, discriminare "to divide, separate"), which has negative connotations today. I suggest a neutral term like "discern" ( discernere "distinguish, perceive, sift/sieve") is better in this case for the casual audience.
Changed. Thanks again.
Thank you for reading. That is a great observation, I will update accordingly 🙏🏼
I appreciate the place this effort is coming from. Your presentation is honest and it was a thoroughly good read.
Thank you, and keep sharing.
Thank you so much for your feedback. And thanks for reading 🙏🏼
This is awe-inspiring thus far! Thank you so much for this translation/adaptation!
Thank you for reading! 🙏🏼